You have a way of delivering descriptions that is enchanting, a good mastery of words. I really liked all of the sensory details. And it was nice to see the explanations behind saving so many items, it helps me empathize with the POV's need to keep such a big "collection."
It's a sad ending, but almost poetic that their long-gone friends are there for the character in the form of their memories as they presumably reach their final moments. If I interpreted that all right.
Glad I stopped by to check this out, good luck with the rest of your work! :)
Aw thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I'm not sure if you were a part of the server when we had the first writing challenge, but this was my entry :) It couldn't win anything though because I'm a mod!
All the love in the world to you, Liz, and you definitely have a tremendous gift, but why oh why do your stories have to be so chilling?? *shudder* (lol)
A great read!
You have a way of delivering descriptions that is enchanting, a good mastery of words. I really liked all of the sensory details. And it was nice to see the explanations behind saving so many items, it helps me empathize with the POV's need to keep such a big "collection."
It's a sad ending, but almost poetic that their long-gone friends are there for the character in the form of their memories as they presumably reach their final moments. If I interpreted that all right.
Glad I stopped by to check this out, good luck with the rest of your work! :)
Aw thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I'm not sure if you were a part of the server when we had the first writing challenge, but this was my entry :) It couldn't win anything though because I'm a mod!
I’m assuming that’s how I found this Substack…
That’s cool! Hope it was a fun writing challenge. :)
All the love in the world to you, Liz, and you definitely have a tremendous gift, but why oh why do your stories have to be so chilling?? *shudder* (lol)
That's a great question =D hehehe
(and thank you ;)